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How to Write a Good Essay

Writing and Citing

Sample Essay

 

Medaille College
Veterinary Technology Department
Buffalo, New York

Writing and Citing
Using the CBE Style of Documentation
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Method of documentation adapted from the [CBE] Council of Biology Educators for use in the Medaille College Veterinary Technology Program

Examples are indicated by text written in green italics

A) When and Why to Document

Citations and quotations are used to give credit to the author of something, including
words, pictures and ideas. If you use the exact words of someone else, you must
quote them, by using "quotation" marks at the beginning and end of the words. Only
use a quote, however, if you absolutely have to because they're the absolutely perfect
words and if you change them, you lose the whole purpose of quoting. In other words, quote only very rarely.

It is better to paraphrase (use the information in your own sentence)--this is citation.
One of the most difficult parts of writing is deciding what should be cited and what
doesn't need to be cited. Here are a few criteria to help you choose:

    • If you find the same exact information in all of the sources, it's common knowledge and doesn't need cited.
    • If you use numbers that are different in all sources, cite it (most numbers will need to be cited).

If you find conflict between information in sources...

    • Check the dates (usually the newer date is more accurate)
    • Check additional sources to find a consensus

Here are a couple of other cautions when writing:

    • Do not write a string of quotations or citations and call it a paper.
    • Two adjacent sentences should not be quotes or citation

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B) Citations

    1. Introduction
      • Purpose- attribute authorship to words, artwork & ideas used in writing
      • Parts- author's surname and year of publication
      • Format- in parentheses with no comma (ex. McCurnin 1994)
      • Location-
        Within the text
        Below diagrams, tables and artwork


    2. Examples:

      • Single author & reference-
        A client’s perception that her pet has an injury which requires emergency care may not be accurate; it is often impossible to determine the urgency of a situation without examining the patient (Wheeler 1994).

      • If a reference is cited close to the use of an author’s name in the text and
        author identification is clear, only the publication year should be cited:
        Stuart Forney has described the effect of urine pH on the rate of excretion of
        aspirin from the body (1994).

      • If there are two or more references by the same author in a citation, separate
        the years by commas:
        The relationship of urine volume to the quantity of microscopic sediment seen on a slide has been clearly demonstrated (Osborne 1988, 1991, 1997).

      • If more than one document is published in the same year by an author, they
        should be designated by a letter, beginning with “a”:
        As Feldman discussed in his recent work (1998a, 1998b), inaccuracies occur when human point-of-care diagnostic systems are used in veterinary medicine.

      • If a document has two authors, cite both names connected with “and”:
        Stress, bacteria and viruses contribute to the development of bovine
        respiratory disease complex in calves (Gill and Knight 1994).


      • If a document has three or more authors, cite the first author’s name followed
        by “and others”:
        A Veterinary Technician must understand the emotional needs of the client whose pet has been diagnosed with cancer in order to help effectively manage the treatment of the patient (O’Brien and others 1994).

      • If you refer to a document that is cited in a source which you did not use,
        provide the original author’s name and year of publication “cited in” the author
        and year for the resource that you used:
        Anesthetic vaporizers can be classified by their method of temperature
        compensation (Hartsfield 1987 cited in Cornick 1994).

      • Page numbers should be cited when quoting, separated from the year by a
        comma:
        A graduate Veterinary Technician from Ontario said: “I believe that most
        people being treated in a hospital would want a formally educated nurse to perform their treatments” (Scott 1999, p 25)

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C) References

  1. Introduction:

    • Purpose- Provide complete information on resources

    • Parts-
      Author
      Year of publication
      Title of publication
      Title of document if applicable (ex. chapter or article)
      Book: edition, city of publisher, name of publisher & pages
      Journal: volume, number and pages
      Internet: web address and date accessed

    • Format

      Period-

      Closes each bibliographic group
      Ex. an author's name or a title
      Not used in abbreviations (ex. p 7, DVM, Jones AB)

      Comma-

      Separates similar items in a bibliographic group
      Ex. Hoskins JD, Seahorn TI and Gill MS

    • Location- End of the document

    • Types-
      References: all documents cited in paper
      Additional References: not specifically cited but used as sources
      Bibliography: supplemental readings not used as sources

    • Order-
      Alphabetize by author's surname
      When one person authored more than one reference, order by publication date
      (earliest to most recent)
      Multiple authors are listed with the primary author's name first
      Do not alphabetize names within a reference (ex. Tully TN and Martin HD)

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  1. Examples:

    • Journal Article-
      Structure: Author. Year of publication. Title of article. Title of journal. Volume (number): page numbers.
      Sample: Wortinger A. 1999. Poisonous Household Plants. Veterinary Technician. 20 (5): 261-272.
      Citation: (Wortinger 1999)

    • Journal article with an organization as author--
      Structure: [Organization abbreviation in brackets] Full organization name. Year. Title of article. Title of journal. Volume (number): page numbers.
      Sample: [AVMA] American Veterinary Medical Association. 1998. Report of the AVMA Panel on Euthanasia. Journal of the American Veterinary Medical Association. 188 (3): 252-268.
      Citation: (AVMA 1998)

    • Journal article with an anonymous author-
      Structure: [Anonymous in brackets]. Year of publication. Title of article. Title of journal. Volume (number): page numbers.
      Sample: [Anonymous]. 1999. Veterinary Technician Specialties Update. Veterinary Technician. 20 (5): 257.
      Citation: (Anonymous 1999)

    • Book with author(s)-
      Structure: Author. Year of publication. Title. Edition. Location of publisher. Publisher. Number of pages.
      Sample: Hillyer EV and Quesenberry KE. 1997. Ferrets, Rabbits and Rodents- Clinical Medicine and Surgery. 2nd ed. Philadelphia PA: WB Saunders. 432 p.
      Citation: (Hillyer and Quesenberry 1997)

    • Book with an editor-
      Structure: Name, editor. Year of publication. Title. Edition. Location of publisher: Publisher. Number of pages.
      Sample: McCurnin DM, editor. 1994. Clinical Textbook for Veterinary Technicians. 3rd ed. Philadelphia PA: WB Saunders. 655 p.
      Citation: (McCurnin 1994)

    • Books with chapters by different authors-
      Structure: Author. Year of publication. Title of chapter. In: Author. Title. Edition. Location of publisher: Publisher. Pages in book.
      Sample: Hoskins JD and Cheney JM. 1994. Parasitology and Public Health. In: McCurnin DM, editor. Clinical Textbook for Veterinary Technicians. 3rd ed. Philadelphia PA: WB Saunders. p 72 – 96.
      Citation: (Hoskins and Cheney 1994)

    • Internet journal article-
      Structure: Author. Year of publication. Title of article. Available from: web address. Date accessed.
      Sample: Gordon J. 1997. Transgenic Animals as “Alternatives” to Animal Use. Available from: http://ourworld.compuserve.com/homepages/TheBroons/whytgx.htm. Accessed 1999 July 23.
      Citation: (Gordon 1997)

    • Internet book-
      Structure: Author. Year of publication. Title of book [monograph online in brackets]. Edition. Location of publisher: Publisher. Available from:web address. Date accessed.
      Sample: Bennett BT, Brown MJ and Schofield JC. 1994. Essentials for Animal Research- A Primer for Research Personnel [monograph online]. 2nd ed. Beltsville MD: National Agriculture Library. Available from: http://www.uiowa.edu/~vpr/research/animal. Accessed 1999 June 15.
      Citation: (Bennett and others 1994)

       
    • Lecture / presentation-
      Structure:  Author.  Date.  Title.  Description.  Location:  Organization.
      Sample:  Macer V.  2 November 2002.  Herps 101- Biology, Husbandry and Medical Problems of Herpetofauna Native to New York.  Lecture.  Grand Island NY:  New York State Wildlife Rehabilitation Council.
      Citation:  (Macer 2002)

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October 09, 2003